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You’re alone and no one will find you

January 30, 2015
By Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Your always beautiful in my eyes&quot;<br /> &quot;Be who you are not what someone else wants you to be&quot;


you’re alone in the dark
no one is going to find you
you’re here because of a boy
an amazing, nice, sweet boy

you’re broken and no one will help you
you’re alone and no one is coming
how did he get so close to me?
why does he mean so much?

he made you smile, laugh, and happy
now the thought of him hurts
it rips, tares, and your crying
you think how did this happen

he was everything to me
I could never give him up
I still can’t give him up
I…..I loved him

his touch sent shivers up my spin
his kiss gave me a high feeling
his hug made me wish he’d never let me go
then one day he’s gone forever

he sent you into the dark
you’re hurting, missing, braking
he is all you want but he ain’t coming
they won’t ever let him back

you’re in a dark room thinking
why? Am I not good enough?
you can’t let go of him

you feel in love with a boy named Death
your alone no one is going to find you.
 


The author's comments:

A broken heart is the worst pain i have ever felt. This is how i felt after my first heartbreak. but i'm ok now


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Ana143 GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2016 at 7:34 pm
Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Your always beautiful in my eyes&quot;<br /> &quot;Be who you are not what someone else wants you to be&quot;

Thanks it means alot to me

SCSKATE SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2015 at 5:30 pm
SCSKATE SILVER, Austin, Texas
9 articles 5 photos 23 comments
I love the overall mood of this poem. It's really good!

Ana143 GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2015 at 9:32 am
Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Your always beautiful in my eyes&quot;<br /> &quot;Be who you are not what someone else wants you to be&quot;

Thanks you and well it was like I feel in love with death cause it was like he ki.lled me

on Feb. 14 2015 at 7:55 pm
RedPhoenix SILVER, Boone, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do what you can, with what you have, where you are.&quot;<br /> <br /> ~Teddy Roosevelt

That last line stanza (the "you fell in love with a boy named death" one) is very powerful. Well done.