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Firee

February 12, 2015
By ErinAshlyn BRONZE, Manchester, Missouri
ErinAshlyn BRONZE, Manchester, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;For every minute you are angry you lose sixty seconds of happiness.&rdquo; <br /> ― Ralph Waldo Emerson


Of course there was a fire.
It always begins with a spark.
Then it catches on the dry kindling of our empty hearts.
Suddenly, life bursts through our desolate veins
Returning the warmth we longed for

Alas, mighty fire can be quenched
with the pouring rain
and it’ll reduce to an ember
and the smoke will rise
choking the breath of our love
the death of a fire
is the death of a heart


The author's comments:

When a relationship dies, so does the fire


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on Apr. 2 2015 at 3:08 pm
ErinAshlyn BRONZE, Manchester, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;For every minute you are angry you lose sixty seconds of happiness.&rdquo; <br /> ― Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sure! Thank you for reading! Please rate and comment on both of my pieces

HammadWaseem said...
on Feb. 25 2015 at 4:58 am
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.<br /> -Eminem<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t see me<br /> -John Cena<br /> <br /> Ooh, somebody stop me!<br /> -Mask

I like this poem. Good job. BTW will you rate and comment on my work? TeenInk.com/video/dancing/114206/The-Unbeatable-Breakdancer @ErinAshlyn