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His Eyes
February 26, 2015
His eyes can capture unseen truths within each of you.
His, stare you see.
It’s a powerful thing.
Some have truths they want to hide.
Others have truths that are there unseen pride.
For His eyes, His stare , well he can see them all.
So best you beware
© Lauren S., Reading, Berkshire, UK
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Amara-rose GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2015 at 5:55 pm
Than you for your kind words i have some work pending approval now how you check it out and love it ^_^
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2015 at 5:44 pm
^.^ I like this lol It's in the same category as my poem "eyes" lol Iove this XD keep writing and most definitely tell us what you do next :)
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 5 2015 at 5:57 pm
I think you write wonderfully! But of course like always everything could use a touch up;)
TheBlackCrow901 SILVER said...
on Mar. 24 2015 at 1:51 pm
I love the flow of this poem
I love the ideas in this poem with his captivating stare which can 'capture unseen truths'. Rhyming is a little rocky as it's only there once and the ending is stunted. I think if you'd rhymed the end also, it might have ended with more finality. Punctuation could be improved.
Amara-rose GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2015 at 10:35 am
sure i will later today atm im working on a new poem
HammadWaseem said...
on Mar. 5 2015 at 2:43 pm
What a wonderful poem! @Amara-rose will you comment on my video work? TeenInk.com/video/dancing/114206/The-Unbeatable-Breakdancer
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