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May 14, 2015
By AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
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&quot;It takes more strength to cry at mid-defeat.&quot;<br /> -Susan Boyle<br /> &quot;The closer you get to the light, the bigger your shadow becomes.&quot;<br /> -Kingdom Hearts

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Sometimes
I look up at the sky
And feel her tears
Fall from her diamond blues

© Emily L., Redmond, OR

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ThrillQueen126 said...
on Feb. 4 2016 at 9:41 pm
ThrillQueen126, Seattle, Washington
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This is short, but it conveys your thoughts perfectly, though leaving a little up to the imagination. I love it!
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2015 at 11:31 am
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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it's basically a haiku, there's no need to honestly elaborate. it's a short poem about rain, actually. It's in the eyes of the beholder, good job, avenge
Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jul. 20 2015 at 6:02 pm
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I disagree with the other comments. I don't think you need to elaborate with this poem at all; it leaves an amazing resonance and a chance for interpretation from the reader. Leave it how it is, your words create a wonderful message and emotion.
Consalvator BRONZE said...
on Jun. 29 2015 at 10:35 am
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Simple but eloquent. I love it! Great use of personification. I agree with @Luv4Ever, I felt you could have elaborated because I'm left with questions; but I like that the simplicity allows my mind to fill in the rest of the story which I really enjoy.
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2015 at 11:35 am
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This piece is beautiful and i love the wording but i feel it is just the start. I wish you had expanded more on what you were trying to say because, as a reader, i am left hanging.