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I am the cold, dark rain

November 13, 2015
By kaylacampbell SILVER, Mt.Sterling, Kentucky
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kaylacampbell SILVER, Mt.Sterling, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve" - Stephen Chomsky

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I am the cold, dark rain.
Pouring down from the grey sky.
My love for him
was something I could not deny.
I asked him if he still loved me,
I just needed him to clarify.
My feelings
were soon to oversupply.
I can’t take the pain,
watching his love multiply.
I am the cold, dark rain.
Pouring down from the grey sky.
They told me to stop loving him,
but I had to defy.
These feelings for him,
are an ultrahigh.
Please
don’t make me reply.
When I walk out on life.
Because I just needed to say Goodbye.
I promise one day
I will reunify.
I am the cold, dark rain
Pouring down from the grey sky
I am sorry
I didn't really want to die.

© Jasmine R., Bourbon, MI

The author's comments:

In class we has to wright the story of someone else, and this is what my outcome was, and I love it. 

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