Freedom | Teen Ink

Freedom

November 24, 2015
By Overkill SILVER, Gallup, New Mexico
Overkill SILVER, Gallup, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Killing Perfection<br /> The secret to sucess is constancy of purpose


I remember a time 

Where we were like cupcakes and roses 

Soft and fragile as can be 

Melting into one another 

Delicate as glass slippers 

 

And when we weren't so put together 

It crumbled and cracked in its ugliness 

When there was only one of us 

 

And that wasn't me 

It was you 

Standing on the epoch of eternity 

Alone. You were fine 

I was fine 

But I didn't like the lack of breathing room 


The author's comments:

This was not put well together. But I felt seeing something there, tangible would free me from this daunting weight of trying to create poetry again, even if I'm not so good at it. 

It's a start. 


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Apr. 13 2016 at 5:57 pm
Overkill SILVER, Gallup, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Killing Perfection<br /> The secret to sucess is constancy of purpose

It can be interpreted however you wish. I wrote it getting over a break up of all things but it could work friend wise as well too :)

on Nov. 26 2015 at 9:17 pm
nelehjr DIAMOND, Lingle, Wyoming
60 articles 11 photos 379 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Hmm... Can't say I completely understand it... But are you speaking of losing a childhood friend?