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Brain Wreck

November 24, 2015
By acmcg714 SILVER, Christiansburg, Virginia
acmcg714 SILVER, Christiansburg, Virginia
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My mind is a glass room

with scratches and cracks.

I throw rocks at the walls

and they throw them right back.

 


A sense of ambivalence

engulfs my brain

I'm both happy and sad,

oh how crazy that seems.

 

The threads pull apart,

my head bursts at the seams

with perturbed thoughts

of faraway dreams.



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KingFoe SILVER said...
on Nov. 27 2015 at 3:52 pm
KingFoe SILVER, Morristown, New Jersey
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I think this might be better without ambivalence or perturbed. I like those words and the poem with or without them is flowy and nice, but I think better flow might be reached with two different words. I like it either way though.