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Fallibility of the Universe

January 16, 2016
By PragmaticIdealist SILVER, Midlothian, Texas
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PragmaticIdealist SILVER, Midlothian, Texas
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"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity." -Edgar Allan Poe

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help this hollow, very hallow, keep from drowning in thy sorrow
man and earth made of nothing suffer endless, endless busting
warrior, warrior, prince of peace, come now save me from this beast
forgiveness comes and goes so fast, is it just a thing of past
here and now is today, only ache will await

© Roumany P., St. Paul, MN

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Dameon_Farris PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 29 2016 at 11:55 am
Dameon_Farris PLATINUM, Folton, District Of Columbia
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Wow great poem trully a remarkable resemblance to the original princess in the tower reference and I think it's referring to a lone girl who's struggling with everyday life and is wanting a man(true love) to come and help her through these tough times and il say it is an splendid poem and is fluent and is clear and is one of an kind great job XD