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Picture Street MAG
February 25, 2009
Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.
© Raine E., New York, NY
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KylaS said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 9:40 am
I really like how short and sweet this piece is. Powerful, but no gaudy words to get in the way. Beautiful idea that all people can relate to!(:
abbymac said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:01 am
I like how simple, yet powerful this poem is. Great job.
LaylaA said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 11:17 pm
I wish you continued writing more because it's very promising and I really like it. But the last verse just cut the flow to it.
sweetdollsarah BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 7:42 pm
It was a good poem but it was simple...too plain add some funk or a big bang at the ending make us feel what you felt when you rote it make us feel your words your mood your atmoshere so that we aren't reading just empty words.
ShelbyMarie93 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 2:50 pm
Nice idea. However, I think it would have been much, MUCH better if you had elaborated on the idea. Make it longer...captivate your reader. Make us SEE and FEEL your idea, not just read it...
bobhot6 said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 10:22 pm
I disagree. I think the fact that the conclusion is so simple and concise makes the piece very powerful. The author could've just as easily tried to stretch the ending out with a jumble of words, be he/she got the point across with 3 simple words. Nice work!!
silentvocal SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 6:35 pm
I agree because the words just seem to flow, even though it's brief it's all that's been like encased in it u know? like such a dense concept and the selected wording. I do like it-it's something you could sit on for a while just thinking about.
Photo_97 said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 4:01 pm
i agree 100% KEEP IT UP 8D
dancer0529 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 12:13 pm
this is really good and really sad at the same time...i wish this actually happened in the first place too it would be a good ending to all my problems. please keep writing....
Brandon Sipp said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:15 am
i THINK THIS IS TRY TO EXPLAIN THAT SH'E IMPATIENT
JillybeanN said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 5:10 pm
This is a great little poem with an awesome twist to it.
CammyLashay SILVER said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 9:27 am
Truly takes thought...enjoyed it
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on Sep. 28 2010 at 8:48 pm
That's a cool poem! Great Job! WIll you please read some of my poems?
passion.fable14 SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2010 at 5:18 pm
geeze. what's wrong with you? OBVIOUSLY you can't appreciate beautiful work when it's sitting right on front of you on a silver plate.
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