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The Savior

February 2, 2016
By theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Can&#039;t keep my eyes from the circling sky,<br /> Tongue-tied and twisted<br /> Just an earth-bound misfit, I&quot;<br /> ~Pink Floyd<br /> <br /> &quot;Now is blessed<br /> The rest<br /> remembered &quot; <br /> <br /> ~Jim Morrison

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And I guess it seems,
there’s no one that can make me feel relieved.

So I push my extremities away from me,
letting those hands fall upon hard ice
until they mend themselves.

I’ve watched ice melt, the sun rise for hours, and time move on
without me,
slipping through my fingers like chrism

I’m waiting on wire chairs,
diamond patterns and augmented silent echoes, segments of incessant noise.

secluded outside alone, looking in
longing to be held up enough
to taste the light on my skin

© Alyssa G., Charlotte, NC

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