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Dark days
September 28, 2016
Where there darkness there light
Sorry dont cut it i've heard my whole life
Let it be heard the darkness will fade
When the light comes there will only be shade
© Andrew S., Pompton Plains, NJ
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This article has 6 comments.
the first sentence makes no sense,instead I believe you should change it to "When there's darkness, there's light." It's not a bad or a good poem. It needs work, in my opinion it's too short but that's just me. you need periods because these sentences don't go together. I hope this helps.
IWasJusTrynaSwim said...
on Oct. 4 2016 at 2:17 pm
@Sheyenne I want a bag of chips
HartTaylor BRONZE said...
on Oct. 4 2016 at 10:20 am
This is SO good!
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