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young love

December 4, 2016
By Kama.dare BRONZE, Souderton, Pennsylvania
Kama.dare BRONZE, Souderton, Pennsylvania
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devoured

not dipping my toes in
absent minded
waiting for the right moment

absorbed

not testing the waters
observing
waiting a little bit

consumed

head over tails
nothing else on my mind
completely and totally in love


The author's comments:

I was inspired by little ones, young children who's emotions are completely and totally pure. However fast they change, they are sincere and genuine. My young sister inspired me, with her devoted love and assurance. When they feel something it consumes them, when they want something that is all they want, and when they love it is wholeheartedly. There is no holding back, and that is the kind of love I hope to find one day.


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devon_3939 said...
on Dec. 11 2016 at 7:59 pm
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i love this

Shamaie28 said...
on Dec. 11 2016 at 2:03 am
10/10 Very deep poem!