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She Doesn't Love You Anymore

October 10, 2017
By hope.b GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
hope.b GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
12 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She is water. Soft enough to offer life, tough enough to drown it away." -rupi kaur


You do not belong in her heart.

Nor do you occupy her mind. 

She has grown to be smart.

She has grown to be kind.

Not only to others.

But to herself. 

You are now another old novel on her bookshelf. 



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hope.b GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2017 at 12:37 am
hope.b GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
12 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She is water. Soft enough to offer life, tough enough to drown it away." -rupi kaur

Thank you!!

on Oct. 23 2017 at 1:18 pm
lasombra SILVER, Indian Land, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"helping one person doesnt change the world, but for that one person, the world changes." - unknown

I like it. Im not sure what to say about it, simply because theres not much to critique.

Twhite said...
on Oct. 17 2017 at 11:20 pm
Hope this is really really good. I entered one of my poems into a contest and just won. My poem is getting published in a book. It would be awesome if you entered a contest like that. You have a high chance of winning

tredem said...
on Oct. 17 2017 at 11:06 pm
quite beautiful