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Beautiful is Rain

October 14, 2009
By Cristobal BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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Dark clouds cover sun
You hear deep roar of thunder
You smell rain in air

Cool breeze touches flesh
Water falls from the Heavens
Feels like time is still

So beautiful rain is
Watching ripples in puddles
Rain, peaceful beauty

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beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 2:02 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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I could feel the raindrops on my skin when reading this poem. You really appealed to the senses~
Houf_pooooferly said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 11:44 am
This was an interesting poem. I felt like there was too much description.
gonzaleztd GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 8:27 am
gonzaleztd GOLD, Clearwater, Florida
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This is beautiful! Makes me wanna dance in the rain! :)
selenafan1 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 21 2011 at 4:42 pm
selenafan1 BRONZE, Freeport, Texas
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I really liked this im having trouble with haikus i hav to do one for math cuz i just do freeverse HELP
EricForman said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:26 pm
EricForman, Texas
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The imagery is truly amazing. Its like it is actually real.
minecrafter said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:22 pm
minecrafter, Farmers Branch, Texas
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Beautiful, truely beautiful, very discriptive.
nikkigonefishin GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:40 am
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I LOVE the rain!
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2011 at 8:29 pm
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Nice work!! :] that was very very pretty! beautiful imagery
BlindSamurai GOLD said...
on Sep. 12 2010 at 5:30 pm
BlindSamurai GOLD, Bridgewater, New Jersey
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Beautifully composed, really good work.

Check out my work at BlindSamurai please! All comments appreciated

Annika-Katryn SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 7:10 pm
Annika-Katryn SILVER, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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the imagery was beautiful, and came across so well. i could see it, feel it, taste it. thank you :)
marykate said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 12:08 pm
Great job! The middle haiku was my fav but all of it was very good.
TheOcherousRodentia PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:51 am
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One word. Lovely! Great Job! Keep up the good work.
munkyman95 GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 4:49 am
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
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Nice, elegant control to get your message through in a strict style without becoming awkward
mrs.Mickey Mouse said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:13 pm
Cristobal i really like your poem more than any other i have read i also write poems too. good work by the way.