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March 15, 2010
By Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you&#039;re a mile away from them and you have their shoes.<br /> --When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people&#039;s eyes.

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Summer sun is hot
Water brings a cool relief
Sand between my toes

© Jonathan L., LaGrange, GA

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Sarbear GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 3:00 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you&#039;re a mile away from them and you have their shoes.<br /> --When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people&#039;s eyes.

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ok, i'll let you know... i'm working on one right now :)
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:16 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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thanks, i'd love to read it and comment when you do!

-rose

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 6:18 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you&#039;re a mile away from them and you have their shoes.<br /> --When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people&#039;s eyes.

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thank you! i will try to write one that's longer. ill let you know if i do.

:)

BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:06 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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and btw, it doesnt have to be short.  you can do multiple verses, like

5

7

5 

 

and then

5

7

5

get it?

Sarbear said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 6:49 pm

of course i will check out your stuff...

Thanks for commenting!!

BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 10:50 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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I just got back from the beach, lolz!  Great haiku, mind commenting on some of mine?  Thx!

-Rose

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:26 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you&#039;re a mile away from them and you have their shoes.<br /> --When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people&#039;s eyes.

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thank you!! it had to be short though!!
HappySappy SILVER said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:19 pm
HappySappy SILVER, Berlin Heights, Ohio
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Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality.<br /> <br /> An eye for an eye makes the whole world go blind.

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nice haiku! it actually lets me imagine the beach even though it is a short poem!