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I wonder...

March 31, 2010
By horsie_luver SILVER, Tigard, Oregon
horsie_luver SILVER, Tigard, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I cannot live without books."-Thomas Jefferson


Right now, I wonder
Why cats don’t do what you want.
Yes, I wonder why.

I often wonder
Why most girls don’t like snakes.
Yes, I wonder why.

I also wonder
why people don’t like math.
Yes, I wonder why.

I really wonder
Why our planet is a sphere.
Yes, I wonder why.

I always wonder
Why people don’t like to read.?
Yes, I wonder why.

Lastly, I wonder
What makes rainbows what they are.
Yes, I truly wonder.


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on Sep. 24 2010 at 9:17 pm
horsie_luver SILVER, Tigard, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I cannot live without books."-Thomas Jefferson

all comments and ideas are helpful comments and ideas! (unless of course they're mean etc.)

Whylime said...
on Sep. 24 2010 at 8:47 pm
Whylime, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Grief is the price we pay for love -- Queen Elizabeth ll<br /> Don&#039;t go there, I&#039;ll only follow -- ??? <br /> Why is a raven like a writing desk? -- The Mad Hatter from Alice in Wonderland<br /> Chewing gum is really gross, chewing gum I hate the most -- Willy W.

haha good! i didnt want to seem mean... but yeah you can keep everything... but then you doomething like "you know what i reaaallly wonder? i wonder why people arnt like me". so that its like you were describing yourself in the wonder parts.. idk.. just an idea,kinda stupid.. but.. you know.. its an idea (:

on Sep. 24 2010 at 8:37 pm
horsie_luver SILVER, Tigard, Oregon
5 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I cannot live without books.&quot;-Thomas Jefferson

oh no I don't think that was rude, i knew what you meant. Thanks for the advise! I appreciate it! Next time I'll try to make it be more connected.

Whylime said...
on Sep. 24 2010 at 5:14 pm
Whylime, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Grief is the price we pay for love -- Queen Elizabeth ll<br /> Don&#039;t go there, I&#039;ll only follow -- ??? <br /> Why is a raven like a writing desk? -- The Mad Hatter from Alice in Wonderland<br /> Chewing gum is really gross, chewing gum I hate the most -- Willy W.

oooooops! i meant to say it wasn't that random!! now youre gonna think im a bitter rude person.. ):

Whylime said...
on Sep. 24 2010 at 5:12 pm
Whylime, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Grief is the price we pay for love -- Queen Elizabeth ll<br /> Don&#039;t go there, I&#039;ll only follow -- ??? <br /> Why is a raven like a writing desk? -- The Mad Hatter from Alice in Wonderland<br /> Chewing gum is really gross, chewing gum I hate the most -- Willy W.

i cant really find any probablems... like maybe you could have tied it all together because all the things you wondered about were kinda random. It was like "I really wonder why we eat with spoons, i wonder why. i wonder why, we wear clothes, i wonder why. i wonder why mice like cheese, i wonder why..." you know what i mean. haha it was that random. (: i was just trying to get my point acroos (: haha annnyywayyys, i like the repition. and would you mind reading my "does he know?"

on May. 12 2010 at 9:37 am
horsie_luver SILVER, Tigard, Oregon
5 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I cannot live without books.&quot;-Thomas Jefferson

Please tell me what I can do to improve!

on May. 7 2010 at 8:58 pm
horsie_luver SILVER, Tigard, Oregon
5 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I cannot live without books.&quot;-Thomas Jefferson

Thanks for the support! A bunch of the poems I write and post on here are actually assignments from my Language Arts class at school, but I figured they were good enough to put here as well.

Schubster said...
on May. 7 2010 at 1:39 pm
This was my fav. poem by you, though Ode to X was a close second :) I really like the flow here, and I like the repetition A LOT. Keep Writing! and thanks for the comment on my work :)