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Beach

April 30, 2010
By Nicholas Hutchins BRONZE, Saugus, Massachusetts
Nicholas Hutchins BRONZE, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Sitting in the sun,
Frying just like KFC,
Im going home now.


The author's comments:
This is my first Poem/Haiku so give me tips if you have any to share.

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on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:05 pm
poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"

i guess ill be the first to comment you should definetly consider like free verse. i like how you think though. but try writing deeper poems or if you wanna stick to ones like this . think of like a topic about something that you can reallly relate to..that way when people read it theyll be like wow i can really fit into his shoes...i love poetry ummm feel free to check mine out but please write more..cuz now you got me curious:P