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September 13, 2010
By milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
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The autumn leaf falls,
Making the soft grass it's pier,
A ripple is formed.

© Harrison L., Ruston, LA

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milforce SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 6:40 am
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
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Yes, you're basically right. My point was that one leaf in the grass is the same as one droplet of water in the ocean. The two were just playing each other's parts. Thanks, by the way.
RyanTyler PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 10:14 am
RyanTyler PLATINUM, Windsor, Connecticut
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I love the way the leaves were supposed to represent the ocean. That was what it was supposed to be right. If I'm wrong tell me, but I still like it. :)