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September 13, 2010
By milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
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Clouds roll in atop,
The almighty mountain peak,
And sighs can be heard.

© Trenton O., Highland, UT

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milforce SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 11:25 pm
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
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Thanks so much!
AngelsLullaby GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 4:36 pm
AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
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This put me in a very peaceful state of mind. I loved it. I'm normally not into haikus, but this was great! 5/5 stars.
milforce SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 6:41 am
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
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I'd say the sigh is a good sigh, because I hear as a sort of dreamy sigh, not the 'you didn't get your chores done' kind of sigh, you know? Thanks a lot!
RyanTyler PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 10:04 am
RyanTyler PLATINUM, Windsor, Connecticut
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Was the sigh a good thing or a bad thing because I think it would good either way. Keep it up. :):):)