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Music is my soul

January 1, 2011
By Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

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&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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Fake lyrics and music
Unspoken rhymes, deaf singer
As reality sings it

Unfelt emotions
Kept, hidden, lost ideas, lies!
No visual love? lies!

Do you see it, blind?
Dont you feel it, are you dead?
Am I the lie? Lies!

© Christina E., Henderson, NV

The author's comments:
Music speaks reality, though sometimes its "fake" reality that we dont relate to.
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Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 4:34 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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Aww well thank you!  when we write the only thing that always matters is how deep we feel it, and i felt that one deep down!
Yes, I sure will check out your work sometime soon!
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 7:17 pm
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
21 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t tell me the sky&#039;s the limit when there are footprints on the moon.<br /> Love Always. :)<br /> When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don&#039;t waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

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Wow. This is amazing. For once I don't have words to describe it. It's different, and yet so meaningful and true. You are amazingly talented! Keep up the good work! Check out some of my work? :)
Shahed GOLD said...
on Apr. 9 2011 at 11:35 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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Thank you :) and Yes, its supposed to be .. is it not? lol ,, Thank you again!
Shahed GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 7:14 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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Thank you! I really dont know what to say when I get such comments, :) thank you :) it makes my day
Howell said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 7:12 pm

This one is one of my favorites! You're so thoughtful, using few words of course since it's a haiku.

Again, Shahed, Great job!

FlyleafFreak DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 4:55 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
51 articles 0 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it&quot;~Edger Allan Poe<br /> &quot;In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have.&quot;~Me

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I liked it and, I don't knwo much about haikus but, isn't it supposed to go 5-7-5 or something? Regardless, I liked it good job.