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Seeing Your Soul
July 10, 2011
Looking in your eyes
I don't see just one color
I see a rainbow!
© Brian M., Fishers, IN
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redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 27 2013 at 1:21 am
:) It was a fun poem to write - thank you!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 27 2013 at 1:20 am
Thank you so much! :)
LongLazyDays55 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2012 at 12:44 pm
I LOVE this! Really powerful and it made me smile. The last line is so good: 'I see a rainbow!' Keep writing! :) 5 stars!
dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 1:11 am
aw, you made me smile!! LOVE this so much!! keep writing...and check out my poems too!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 3:14 pm
Thank you for the feedback!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 3:14 pm
Oh - that's so sweet! That was one of the best compliments I ever received on my work!
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 12:51 am
This was amazing. You made me smile with just three lines , and I actually felt amyriad of emotions with it. Short , sweet , and right to the point :)
. said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 12:13 pm
This is Eirias, by the way.
. said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 12:12 pm
It's good. I can't really offer changes, because anything I do would be mine and not yours. Also haikus are very structured so to make any changes would mess the whole thing up.
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 4:50 pm
Thanks! Any type of feedback is welcome!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 4:46 pm
And thank you for checking out my work!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 4:35 pm
Thank you.
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:20 pm
Thanks so much!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:20 pm
I really appreciate it!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 12:27 pm
Thanks, Beaver!
Beaver said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 12:25 pm
It's a wonderful simple poem that makes you reflect on the diversity of the people all around us.
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 11:54 am
The "eyes" have it!
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