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Seeing Your Soul

July 10, 2011
By redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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"I can do anything!"

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Looking in your eyes
I don't see just one color
I see a rainbow!

© Brian M., Fishers, IN

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newteenboi said...
on Sep. 14 2020 at 10:36 am
newteenboi, Moore, Oklahoma
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i like this
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 27 2013 at 1:21 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

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:) It was a fun poem to write - thank you!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 27 2013 at 1:20 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

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Thank you so much! :)
LongLazyDays55 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2012 at 12:44 pm
LongLazyDays55 BRONZE, Other, Other
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I haven&#039;t failed. I just haven&#039;t found 10,000 ways that won&#039;t work. [Thomas Edison]<br /> <br /> When words fail, music speaks.

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I LOVE this! Really powerful and it made me smile. The last line is so good: 'I see a rainbow!' Keep writing! :) 5 stars!
dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 1:11 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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&quot;I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free.&quot; - Michelangelo<br /> &quot;I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am.&quot; - Sylvia Plath

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aw, you made me smile!! LOVE this so much!! keep writing...and check out my poems too!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 3:14 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I can do anything!&quot;

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Thank you for the feedback!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 3:14 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

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&quot;I can do anything!&quot;

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Oh - that's so sweet! That was one of the best compliments I ever received on my work!
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 12:51 am
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

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This was amazing. You made me smile with just three lines , and I actually felt amyriad of emotions with it. Short , sweet , and right to the point :)
. said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 12:13 pm
This is Eirias, by the way.
. said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 12:12 pm
It's good. I can't really offer changes, because anything I do would be mine and not yours. Also haikus are very structured so to make any changes would mess the whole thing up.
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 4:50 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Thanks! Any type of feedback is welcome!
Shadow878 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:50 pm
Shadow878 GOLD, Marion, Indiana
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&quot;I tell you the truth, unless you change and become like little children, you will never enter the kingdom of heaven.&quot; Matthew 18:3<br /> <br /> &quot;Do not pray for easy lives, pray to be stronger men.&quot; JFK<br /> <br /> &ldquo;Science without religion is lame, religion without science is blind.&rdquo;Albert Einstein<br /> <br /> &quot;I believe in Christianity as I believe that the sun has risen: not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else.&quot;<br /> C. S. Lewis <br /> <br /> &quot;A young man who wishes to remain a sound atheist cannot be too careful of his reading.&quot;<br /> C. S. Lewis <br /> <br /> &quot;Anyone who doesn&rsquo;t believe in miracles is not a realist.&quot;<br /> David Ben-Gurion<br /> <br /> &quot;An eye for an eye makes the world go blind&quot; Gandi

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It's good but it's short blurbs like that, that can be crafted into great poems and stories. I say keep working on it.

P.S. Just wanted to give you some contructive critisim

redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 4:46 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

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&quot;I can do anything!&quot;

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And thank you for checking out my work!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 4:35 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

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&quot;I can do anything!&quot;

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Thank you.
Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 11:54 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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*beepbeep* <br /> &quot;Where to, Miss?&quot; <br /> &quot;To the stars.&quot;

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Fun, short, sweet. =)
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:20 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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&quot;I can do anything!&quot;

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Thanks so much!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:20 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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I really appreciate it!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 12:27 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Thanks, Beaver!
Beaver said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 12:25 pm
It's  a wonderful simple poem that makes you reflect on the diversity of the people all around us.
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 11:54 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I can do anything!&quot;

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The "eyes" have it!