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Leaves at Kirstenbosch

August 13, 2011
By Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
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Many little leaves
Arranged like growing pebbles On a tender bough


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on Jan. 22 2012 at 5:03 am
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
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thank you for a thoughtful, lovely comment

on Jan. 22 2012 at 1:00 am
Kingdom_of_the_Forgotten GOLD, Ogden, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Time, the cradle of hope.... Wisdom walks before it, opportunity with it, and repentance behind it: he that has made it his friend will have little to fear from his enemies, but he that has made it his enemy will have little to hope from his friends." ~Charles Caleb Colton

Visually simple, but it's emotional standing is so much more complex.

dancestar GOLD said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 4:09 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

tht was very pretty...just one question..what does the title mean? and plz check out sum of my work like "Girl Next Door" and a piece tht is pending publishing "Free!!" "Alone" and "A Love Unreciprocated" thanks! and keep writing!

on Aug. 17 2011 at 12:40 pm
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
7 articles 0 photos 37 comments
thank you! your adivice is very useful. That first word was indeed quite tricky to place. I will think on it more!

Harebelle GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 12:17 pm
Harebelle GOLD, Vancouver, Other
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Pretty! I like the line about growing pebbles- it's very original. One suggestion: you could use a different two-syllable word in the first line instead of 'many', but it does work the way it is so that's just if you want to. Great job!