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Art of the Muses
January 14, 2012
Made to enrich lives,
A harmony of both spheres
pure delight to ears.
Evoke emotions---
an art form as old as time,
---through sound and silence.
© Chyi-Dean S., North Tustin, CA
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Paradisaically BRONZE said...
on Mar. 6 2014 at 5:55 pm
I love these haikus. I can connect to them very well, but I think the first and second haikus need to be transitioned into smoother.
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 30 2014 at 12:37 pm
I thought on this for like seven minutes. Not because I didn't get it of course, I mean at first I was thinking of some much more than the musical and the lyrical with the first Haiku I mean and then when I read the second Haiku, it gave the poem such a new feel. The last line is the one most EPIC-ly executed and the one I thought on most as well. Through sound and silence. I'll probably remember this forever. Wow such brilliance in ONE line. I am in love. Sound and silence. The correct arrangement of groups of each ccreates something entirely dependent upon composer. Could be pleasant or harsh. the thing is that the basic, the bare, the crux is THIS! Hahah sorry for the over-capitalization. I am after all over-excited.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2013 at 12:07 pm
Very interesting--- i never thought of the whole "spheres" and "ears" rhyme. I just wrote it without paying attention I guess. However I do see your point about the smoother transition. Maybe I could have switched the haiku or added another. But thanks for reading--it feels good to have fresh feedback!
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2013 at 10:09 am
This is really good, i like the second haiku more than the first. Also, since i am giving feedback, the rhyming in the first haiku seemed a bit forced s"spheres" and "ears" i felt that mane that could have been a bit smoother and the transition from the first haiku to the second could also have been a bit smoother. But all in all, I got your message and enjoyed this haiku. Have a nice day and keep rockin
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 16 2013 at 7:29 am
Thank you for commenting on my work. I had forgotten how much I missed it~
hippiechick99 GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 8:01 am
This is a great and simple way to describe music. I love it :)
JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2012 at 1:59 pm
I love it! I'm usually not a fan of short poems, but this had meaning! great job!
dragonfly95 SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2012 at 11:47 am
i like it, short and sweet, and easy to read. good timing and theme. :) enjoyed it.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 11:56 am
Don't even, you're smart! One can tell by your work:)
hippiechick99 GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 11:48 am
This definatly wasn't one of those poems that you can just read once and understand completely. I had to read this several times to get part of the meaning (I AM blonde after all :P). I loved this poem and I hope you keep writing. :)
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:58 am
Thanks, I read ur poem "Silence."
collegegirladventures GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:03 am
Very good!! :) please check out and rate and comment on my haikus, too. Thanks!!
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 9:57 am
ngthis is ama
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 6:11 am
Thank you!
bearsfan654 SILVER said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 10:40 pm
This is a great haiku! It is very wise and powerful!
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 5:33 pm
You're welcome~ Thank you for reading it!
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