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A Cold Chill

January 13, 2012
By beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Wrapped in Winter
An icy, unblinking stare
I shiver beneath.

© Robert S., Stoughton, MA

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beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 5:20 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Cool, thanks~

 

hippiechick99 GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 3:00 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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&quot;... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;<br /> To tell one&#039;s name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog&quot;<br /> -Emily Dickinson

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I love how you display the act of being cold. I write haikus sometimes, but their not really my thing... I tend to get a little bound to the sylables instead of the actual poem. Nice work- I loved it.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 6:24 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Cool~ Hey thanks for reading so much of my stuff! I could use some fresh feedback.
butterfly123 said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 1:57 am
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hey! your language is extremely good. winter is personified so beautifully . great work and keep writing! XD
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 7:22 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Thanks for commenting~ Though I must admit that winter isn't my favorite season, and I was picturing an ice queen staring down at me, daring me to cross her, as I shivered beneath her harsh gaze. Sort of like a master and peasant sort of thing, I guess.
loveissmiles GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 7:11 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
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This is really pretty. I am amazed to find that i like something that has to do with the cold so beautiful. Great job!
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 18 2012 at 10:33 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Thanks for your comment!
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 18 2012 at 10:31 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Thanks---I always pictured winter as some sort of ice queen with a icy personality to match.
FireIgnited said...
on Feb. 18 2012 at 10:05 am
FireIgnited, Valley City, North Dakota
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I like the way you describe winter, and your word choice is great. Nice job!
Kiki_McGee GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2012 at 1:32 pm
Kiki_McGee GOLD, Woodstock, Illinois
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I love how you personified winter. It just gave the poem so much more life.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 5:02 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Thanks again! I thought personifying winter would make the poem a little different.
.Skyye. GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 2:37 pm
.Skyye. GOLD, Oroville, California
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yay! This one is much more unique, I really like it :-)
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 11:05 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Thank you again for commenting!
amahzing_grace GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:41 am
amahzing_grace GOLD, Prattville, Alabama
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this is really good (:
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:22 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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No problem! (sorry if this posts twice) :) :(
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:21 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

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No problem! :)
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 4:29 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

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Thank you for commenting~
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 2:58 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

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Good job, I really do like it especially the second line! :)