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I Flew

January 28, 2012
By EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
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I asked for advice
Bird told me to fly away
I spread my arms and....

© Carly M., Hopedale, MA

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I feel the title helps finishing the poem
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Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 19 2012 at 3:48 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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&quot;No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist.&quot;<br /> - Oscar Wilde

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That was great!  I really like what you did with the title. One of the best ways to end a poem is, unfinished. It leaves you to figure out what happens.