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Despair

April 24, 2013
By The_Confuserister SILVER, Edgecomb, Maine
The_Confuserister SILVER, Edgecomb, Maine
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I think the sky should
never die, for if it would
I would surely cry.



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Wallace BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2013 at 9:53 am
Wallace BRONZE, Edgecomb, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
BanANA CUSTard

I know, right.

Abelinks GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 10:59 am
Abelinks GOLD, Woolwich, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"I wasn't sure if they were talking about bowling, or some weird sexual experience."

Couldn't agree more. Almost as wonderful as some of my pieces.  

on Apr. 29 2013 at 9:20 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Beautiful! It was nothing I would expect in such a small poem such as this. I also adore how you stuck to the "haiku theme," which is nature. Haikus are technically all supposed to be about nature, but sadly some of our fellow writers (including myself) sometimes slip out of that socket. I also like how if you read this poem in a non-haiku format (a sonnet, for example), it would still be poetic! The rhyme is amazing, and this is something very impressive. Great job.