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The Night Sky
May 12, 2013
An endless, dark void
Shimmering, gleaming diamonds
Cover its surface
The stunning night sky
© Steve S., Marblehead, MA
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shadowkiss96 SILVER said...
on May. 16 2013 at 4:20 pm
It's interesting, but I do suggest that you put a little more to the poem. It seems as though it ends abruptly.. however it is very nice and really personifies the sky.
ChocolateLove SILVER said...
on May. 16 2013 at 4:18 pm
Thank you so much :D
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
on May. 16 2013 at 3:47 pm
very good :)
ChocolateLove SILVER said...
on May. 16 2013 at 11:49 am
Thank you :D
OlveraJorge1 said...
on May. 16 2013 at 10:15 am
I liked where this was going but unfortunetly haikus have the tendency of being a little TOO short. Try doing two or three Haikus of 5-7-5 seperately but on the same posting STILL on the topic and I think you can pull off superb haikus. Think of it as an 'Extended Haiku'
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