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June 10, 2013
By bengaltiger PLATINUM, Seymour,mo, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
that's what she said

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A cold breeze cuts
through my woolen cap . . .
I can’t go home.

© Terrin C., Humboldt, IA

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1299836 said...
on Jun. 27 2013 at 4:39 pm
1299836, 1299836, California
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i like how the poem shows the perserverance of the character and how he still goes on eventhough he faced a setback. Constructive criticism: change "can't" to won't. It seems as if the breeze is somehow stopping him from going back. overall, really amazing poem!