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juices of July MAG

February 16, 2014
By DancingShadows GOLD, Pasadena, California
DancingShadows GOLD, Pasadena, California
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Serenity is not freedom from the storm, but peace withing the storm.&quot;<br /> ~Anonymous


honey-sweet, dripping
down the valley of my chin
summer nectarine


The author's comments:

I love nectarines! And summertime :D <3 Have a beautiful day!


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on Apr. 12 2015 at 7:19 pm
DancingShadows GOLD, Pasadena, California
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Serenity is not freedom from the storm, but peace withing the storm.&quot;<br /> ~Anonymous

Thank you all so much! :) I really appreciate your support and feedback. Stay awesome! @JRaye @Beila @Amai-kun @Ray--yo @Iamwhoiam16

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 3 2015 at 8:27 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 523 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, &#039;I just don&#039;t care.&#039;?&quot;

Ahhhh you made my mouth water :):):) Lovely haiku!

Beila BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2015 at 7:51 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
3 articles 0 photos 516 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco.&quot; -Mark Twain

"Valley of my chin"- Gorgeous imagery in so few words. Now I'm craving summer... and a nectarine. ;)

on Apr. 3 2015 at 1:39 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

No wonder this got into the magazine- it's well written, brings vivid images to the reader's mind, and is (dare I say it?) very sweet. Good job, DancingShadows.

on Apr. 3 2015 at 6:01 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

Added it to my favourites. Thank you!

on Apr. 3 2015 at 2:53 am
Iamwhoiam17 GOLD, Lake City Fl, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just be yourself,if you are happy that&#039;s all that matter&#039;s.

I love this poem. Beautifully written! It is amazing! :) Please take and rate my poetry,I will appreciate it.

on Jun. 12 2014 at 3:51 pm
DancingShadows GOLD, Pasadena, California
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Serenity is not freedom from the storm, but peace withing the storm.&quot;<br /> ~Anonymous

Thank you so much! :)

on May. 27 2014 at 7:31 am
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

I love this haiku! I also happen to love nectarines, and you've described what eating them is like perfectly. Congrats on getting Editor's Choice!