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Bounce MAG

March 6, 2014
By Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I taught you to fight and to fly, what more could there be?" - J.M Barrie


Trampoline kisses
It became a simple miss
I fell – broken neck.



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on May. 9 2014 at 1:24 pm
poeticlove143 GOLD, St. Martinville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
" The Lord is my Shepherd there is nothing I shall want" Psalm 23:1

a haiku is about nature but i honestly liked it  a lil bit

on Mar. 15 2014 at 1:35 pm
nelehjr DIAMOND, Lingle, Wyoming
60 articles 11 photos 379 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

I don't quite understand it. Think I like it though...

on Mar. 9 2014 at 8:42 pm
Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I taught you to fight and to fly, what more could there be?" - J.M Barrie

Aw, Ellie!  You are the sweetest!  It is my first haiku.  Thank you so much!!

on Mar. 9 2014 at 7:46 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

I am so proud of you!! It is rare to get an editors' choice award the first time around! (This is your first haiku, right?) You are destined for greatness! 5/5! WIth love, Ellie