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The Last Time

January 9, 2015
By MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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&ldquo;You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.&rdquo; -Mae West<br /> &quot;It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things.&quot; - Leonardo Da Vinci

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The crunching of leaves

snapping and breaking are fresh,

like our memories.

© Angie C., Ft. Wayne, IN

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MysticMusic ELITE said...
on Mar. 11 2015 at 8:34 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.&rdquo; -Mae West<br /> &quot;It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things.&quot; - Leonardo Da Vinci

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Thank you, I wrote this in mind for the best of friends meeting for the last time before one moves away, and they meet in their special place in the forest for the last time. It reminds me of my parting with my best friend years ago, but I still remember the great times we had together, and our attempts to stay in contact.
Redolvene GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2015 at 9:22 am
Redolvene GOLD, Sunny, Florida
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I absolutely love the vibrant imagery and clever comparison in your haiku. It's amazing how much meaning a three-lined poem can convey. 5/5