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February 22, 2015
By MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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&ldquo;You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.&rdquo; -Mae West<br /> &quot;It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things.&quot; - Leonardo Da Vinci

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I'm here, is half true.

I live, is a question. I

want, that's my choice.

© Melani H., Stuart, FL

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MysticMusic ELITE said...
on Mar. 16 2015 at 10:55 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.&rdquo; -Mae West<br /> &quot;It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things.&quot; - Leonardo Da Vinci

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Thank you, I wrote this while imagining one of my stuffed animals actually having feelings and could see everything, but couldn't show it in any way yet. That song sounds very interesting. I've never heard of it before, but I'll be sure to search it on YouTube- thanks!
Beila BRONZE said...
on Mar. 15 2015 at 11:38 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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Nice job speaking from a new perspective. You've used the Rule of 3 to your advantage for sure, which works rather nicely with the haiku format. This poem reminds me of the song "Doll on a Music Box" from the Chitty Chitty Bang Bang movie (look it up on YouTube!).