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The Poppies

March 24, 2015
By NahlaSaad SILVER, Giza, Other
NahlaSaad SILVER, Giza, Other
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The best things in life are unexpected- because there were no expectations - Eli Khamarov


The souls of the dead

Roamed the lonely battlefield

Surveying each corpse

 

Replayed before them

With the haunting sound effects

Are their gruesome deaths

 

They wept at the sight

Tears watering the cursed ground

Then grew the poppies


The author's comments:

This is a series of three haikus to create a haunting image of war, and also to accentuate that from sorrow always comes happiness.


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on Apr. 10 2015 at 5:19 pm
NahlaSaad SILVER, Giza, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The best things in life are unexpected- because there were no expectations - Eli Khamarov

Thank you so much for reading !

on Apr. 9 2015 at 7:20 pm
NahlaSaad SILVER, Giza, Other
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The best things in life are unexpected- because there were no expectations - Eli Khamarov

Thank you so much ! Your comment really gave me confidence in my ability.

on Apr. 8 2015 at 8:18 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
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Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

Beautiful! It really tells a story. Keep it up!

on Mar. 29 2015 at 2:46 am
Emilie_L. BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
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"To not even try because you're afraid of failing is just too pathetic."

I really enjoyed this set of haikus. It certainly encompasses the cold darkness of war, just how haunting and terrible it truly is. The ending is hopeful in the way of new growth/life and I feel like it's a great way to tie it to a more peaceful, optimistic end.