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January 21, 2009
By badlands SILVER, Kerrville, Texas
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little haiku poem
bouncing around in my head
messes up my hair.

© Luke S., Montclair, NJ

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on Sep. 21 2015 at 12:22 pm
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I would have done it better after all Im Edgar Allan Poe
NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2015 at 8:02 pm
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really good! check out and give feedback to my poems please!
CynthiaFeathers ELITE said...
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I love this poem. I've read it a million times, but I still love it.
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Haha I like the imagery :)
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Cute and simple.
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Nice! :) 
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That's so cute!
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This poem reaches out to me oh so much...Its fabulous! I really like it because I can relate
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Hilarious! The last line really turns around the whole meaning of it. Amazing!
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this is so cute!!!

I LUV IT

speedygirl13 said...
on Oct. 28 2011 at 11:43 am
I think thats cool!
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LOL A modern Haiku!

Simple and gets to the point. :)

Great job!

Harebelle GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 10:53 am
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This is so quirky and simple, I love it! It's very entertaining to read.
snaomi PLATINUM said...
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this is totally adorable.  nice work - surprising ending
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER said...
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really sweet and straight forward - it made me smile with its charm!
foreverme BRONZE said...
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I love it. It made me laugh.
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this is a cute twist, maybe something deeper next time... but i do like it
shellbi123 SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2010 at 7:53 am
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I PRETTY SURE THAT IT WAS 5-7-5 . lol but no biggy
shellbi123 SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2010 at 7:50 am
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i love this!!!! haikus are one of my favorite things of poetry, KEEP WRITING:)
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 4:13 pm
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i love this. its funny, but not stupid. great job