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Action Of Violence

February 6, 2018
By DarkPoet SILVER, Crosby, Texas
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There are always violence around,
And there's nothing that we can’t do,
To walk by and watch.

© Candice B., North Port, FL

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WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 9 2018 at 9:54 pm
WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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@DarkPoet Good job! This haiku is realistic, and I think you should know that the first line has 9 and the second has 8. The syllable format is 5-7-5. The third line meets the requirements, but I think you can say, "Violence is known" and the second line may be "Yet we don't do anything" and the third line, "But sit and watch it."