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I Never Thought I Would See the Day...

June 1, 2009
By Allie Sherwood BRONZE, Gfdsgfd, Michigan
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I never thought I would see the day,
where I would look and see you coming my way,
I am happy, and loose all fear,
and everything else starts to disapear.
Your arms are open, so kind and warm,
but as you walk to her my heart is torn.
My heart stops, with her hand in yours,
I walk away, can't see anymore.
As I turn, I start to cry,
and my love for you begins to die.
I never thought I would see the day,
where you would take my heart, and throw it away.

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Team_SESH BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2017 at 8:42 am
Team_SESH BRONZE, Somerdale, New Jersey
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it's lose not loose, there's a clear S sound at the end of the word, while lose has a more Z sound to it. Just saying ;)
sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:50 am
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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very moving. the rhyme is great, and i love the story. great job
-143_ily. BRONZE said...
on Jan. 27 2011 at 5:51 pm
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so truee. i love it. im in the same situation at the moment . 5 stars .  ima add it as my favorite
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Sep. 5 2009 at 5:57 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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oh wow :) i really like this! it's so pure and i love the love you wrote about, how many people have experienced this? all around i love it!