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The Meaning of Love? MAG

November 8, 2008
By Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
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The beating of my broken heart, now chained and locked away,
I hear much louder, through the night, than words we never say.
As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin,
I pray that I might find the strength to fall in love again.
Abandoned innocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.
In the dirt, I bury hope that love leaves unlocked doors.
I am held, though never cherished, yet to be made whole.
My tears can wipe themselves away, but I must save my soul.
Bare feet, run, lead me home, where I am Mother’s child,
And toward the pale rose sunset for a pretty little while.
If broken wings may carry dreams, and carry me to sleep,
Take me far away from love and tell me what it means.


The author's comments:
Writing is my passion … I hope you enjoy my poem!

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on Oct. 9 2009 at 10:47 am
this was awesome....Great job with the rhyming

on Oct. 2 2009 at 11:22 pm
writersheart DIAMOND, B., California
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that was absolutely amazing.

on Sep. 26 2009 at 10:27 pm
messie.egghead SILVER, Fayetteville, Georgia
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this is amazing. beautiful. made me cry. you did a wonderful job!

willisman33 said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 8:38 pm
WOW I LOVE THIs GIRL AND SHE BROKE MY HEART THIS RELaTES

Beau. BRONZE said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 8:20 pm
Beau. BRONZE, Mpls, Minnesota
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THis is beautiful! I adore it. (:

lilah said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 8:05 pm
best poem i've read on here so far :)

on Sep. 26 2009 at 7:04 pm
NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
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I love it, the words speak to me and the emotions are timeless

justbreathe said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 6:09 pm
That's really good. :)

on Sep. 26 2009 at 2:44 pm
Tamara*Monta BRONZE, Warren, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
never regret sompthing that once made u smile

wow i love how the words seam to flow.... Great job

on Sep. 26 2009 at 1:46 pm
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

absolutely breath taking! Beautiful & well written!

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on Sep. 26 2009 at 1:14 pm
Ampersand GOLD, Mount Desert, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"RedVines! What the hell can't they do?"

That was great! Loved it.

on Sep. 26 2009 at 10:56 am
flawsversesperfection BRONZE, Bloomfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The world is an awful, ugly place not to have a best friend."~Sarah Dessen

I loved it. Beautifully written.

on Sep. 26 2009 at 10:07 am
BeckoningLovely GOLD, Wilmington, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
"I think our favorite quotes say more about us than the people we are quoting," John Green

That was beautiful! Very good! I loved it!

on Sep. 26 2009 at 8:14 am
jenx0x3 DIAMOND, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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WOW YOU ARE A PASSIONITE WRITER AND I CAN RELATE TO THIS

I LOVE IT IT IS AWESOME!

AmnyR BRONZE said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 7:52 am
AmnyR BRONZE, Clifton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
To the world, you may be just one person, but to one person, you may be the whole world. ~unknown

wow, this was absolutly amazing. it flowed so beautifully, and sounded good. alot of the poems on this site i just like because of the meaning, but i loved everything about this!

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on Sep. 26 2009 at 7:41 am
Lindsey_O GOLD, Marshfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Words slide off the lead,<br /> creating permanent marks;<br /> writer&#039;s secret code. <br /> ~Lindsey O&#039;Connell

That was amazing! I think I literally stopped breathing when i was reading that!! Absolutely, positively fantastic! and congrats on getting it published in the magazine! :]

Anblue SILVER said...
on Sep. 8 2009 at 2:31 pm
Anblue SILVER, Houston, Texas
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I love how, the rhymes aren't perfect alignments, yet still go together. All of my poems focus so much on rhyming. at least the ones I have on here.Your poetry is inspiring. It's beauty isn't all about perfection, and imperfection is the sign of a good author. keep writing

on Aug. 23 2009 at 9:47 pm
Joegirl2418 GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
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this is breathtaking, i can relate to every line. thank you so much.

on Aug. 19 2009 at 12:27 am
Jessicka BRONZE, Bradenton, Florida
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well done!:)

on Aug. 7 2009 at 10:46 pm
Vindictive_Love BRONZE, Abq, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence wins championships. <br /> Michael Jordan <br /> <br /> Whatever you do in life, will be insignificant, but it&#039;s very important that you do it.<br /> Mahatma Ghandi

truly beautiful! so much emotion and thoughts come towards the reader. excellent vocab. i absolutely loved it! keep up the great work! read my poem breakdown and comment lol