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That's Me.

September 27, 2009
By Hallow SILVER, Peru, Indiana
Hallow SILVER, Peru, Indiana
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Most people don't know how they're gonna feel from one moment to the next, but a dope fiend has a pretty good idea. They just look at the labels on the little bottles.


So I put off sleep and my dreams
Are dying for release
But they can wait

So I put off death and my soul
Is somewhere out of me
It's too late

So I put off life and my future
Can't look anymore dim
But its fair

So I put off hope and my purpose
Is seeming less clear
It's not fair

I want to dream a calm skyline
With death a welcome highway sign
On this road called life ahead of me
With reason and purpose easy to see
But that's not me and will never be
So down my spirit I call whiskey
And pass out on top of the sheets
To wake up cold and shivering.

That's me. That's me, oh no. That's me.



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on Nov. 16 2009 at 2:52 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

I loved this poem. . . its wonderful. Most works that are posted on here are by depressed teenagers obsessed with cutting themselves. Your poetry is so beautiful and your a difference among the masses of clones.

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx

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on Oct. 12 2009 at 12:26 am
helly BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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that was great.I like it,alot.

on Oct. 11 2009 at 9:48 am
TimeMachine SILVER, Mercer Island, Washington
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Wow. Another wonderful song of yours.

The conciseness of it reminds me of Death Cab for Cutie's lyrics. (I'm a fan of DCC :D )

Anyway, I guess I'll have to favorite another song of yours. Hahahaha.

on Oct. 10 2009 at 5:00 am
LoveBam14 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
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If you stand for nothing, you&#039;ll fall for anything.

I love this, it's...so...deep(:

& the end; i love the like sarcastic tone :D

keep it up