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You Left Me

October 12, 2009
By singingchic15 SILVER, Belfast, Maine
singingchic15 SILVER, Belfast, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Which hurts the most: <br /> Saying something and wishing you had not,<br /> Or saying nothing, <br /> and wishing you had?


Don't cone,
close to me.
That's how I thought,
it should be.
But when you held your hand out,
it felt right.

I feel so numb,
and rundown.
Since you left me,
I have felt so empty.

When you just left me,
my heart just stopped beating.
And as it starts aching,
you're not around.

You hurt me so badly baby.
And you haven't been true lately.
So I will watch you walk away,
cuz it's too late.
Things are so hard without you.
Cuz you haven't been here,
to help me.
And now I'll just fall to the ground.

I'm sinking down,
so steadily.
I turn around,
so carefully.
And once I did things began to fall
into place.

Been missing you,
terribly.
It hurts so much,
just to see;
you with someone else,
that is not me.

Cuz when I saw you with her
you just ignored me.
And now I'm seeing everything,
so clearly.

I see that you've moved on baby.
So now you're not here to save me.
And now I will just fade away
until I hear you say:
"I'm sorry I left you baby.
So will you try and forgive me maybe?"
But that will never happen now.
Cuz you left me.

Each and every time I see you,
you turn away.
And every time I speak,
you walk away.
You said that you loved me,
and I wanted to believe.
But this is just so wrong,
baby can't you see?
But I wanna know at once
how you feel about me now.
Since you left me.
Why did you leave me....

The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this song between me and my ex-boyfriend. And in this song, this is exactly how I felt and maybe some of you can relate.
The song is basically about a bad break-up. Where the girl is not handling the break-up very well and the guy keeps ignoring her

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on Apr. 14 2010 at 10:12 am
AddisonElizabeth, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
0 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me.

Wow. This song reminds me of how i felt when my ex of 10months dumped me. It suckedd! i went through like some kind of depression or something. It took me..hm..like 6 months to get over him. then he came back and i dated him again! only for a little bit. then i dumped him cuz i found another guy(:  soo hah im okay now. BUT anyways. great song. i wish i could actually hear it.

geeebabyy22 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:04 am
geeebabyy22, Saugus, Massachusetts
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this was so good. you should make it into a song. would be a total hit! great job! write more

xo0amanda17 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:04 am
xo0amanda17, Saugus, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
yaaaaaaaaaaah!

this is great .. :) this is my favorite out of all the ones ive read so far .. your awesome!

on Jan. 16 2010 at 10:22 pm
Jessica17 BRONZE, Norfolk, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments
Wow this is excatly khow i felt when my ex left me....

on Dec. 12 2009 at 7:37 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

this is great. good job. I can definetly tell this is ur passion. U have awesome talent

kpf1991 said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 10:14 pm
kpf1991, East Hanover, New Jersey
0 articles 0 photos 13 comments
Hey could you check out "anguish" or "They see through me" and rate it or just let know what you think? you have great talent and i'd really appreciate your input

on Nov. 11 2009 at 1:26 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
You did a great job on the wording in this song, keep it up and write some more, you get good reactions with relationship songs. Keep writing =]

on Nov. 8 2009 at 5:42 pm
jaimieolson3 BRONZE, Dexter, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
i love this,

it reminds me of me and my ex.

/:

on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:35 am
randomperson BRONZE, Bend, Oregon
2 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Treat others the way you want to be treated

This is kind of stupid, but i am 14, and ive never had a girl friend so i dont know what it feel like to break up with someone, but sorry about you and you bf, like the song though, great job

Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 3:45 pm
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

wow.... i know EXACTLY how that feels... idk if anyone could word it any better.

on Oct. 20 2009 at 11:35 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
15 articles 0 photos 119 comments
im so sorry ya i feel the same way me and my bf just broke uo on 10-19-09 and im hurt bad but its my time to be happy(:

on Oct. 19 2009 at 4:20 am
singingchic15 SILVER, Belfast, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Which hurts the most: <br /> Saying something and wishing you had not,<br /> Or saying nothing, <br /> and wishing you had?

Awww...I'm sorry about you and your bf. :( This song showed exactly how I felt when mine and I broke up; I hope I didn't hurt you when I wrote it...

on Oct. 17 2009 at 1:21 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Death truly makes an artist&quot;

this is great me and my vary first bf just broke up *sigh* its not fair