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February 12, 2010
By bloodypoet GOLD, Los Lunas, New Mexico
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bloodypoet GOLD, Los Lunas, New Mexico
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you live until you die but if you can't live then you can't die.

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Without my eyes
I cannot see
without my lungs
I cannot breath
without my tounge
I cannot speak

Witthout my heart
I cannot love
but thats an emotion
I never did need
through out my whole life
my whole soul
thats the one thing
i never did really need

but my mind has been lost
without you
so for me please
speak for me
breath for me
and see for me
please my dear

© Rebecca R., Edison, NJ

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bloodypoet GOLD said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 10:56 pm
bloodypoet GOLD, Los Lunas, New Mexico
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thank you for that
xLpoet SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 1:54 pm
xLpoet SILVER, Bristow, Virginia
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This is absoluetly amazing!!!!!!!!!! I hope this gets published in the mag!