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She Woke Up

June 9, 2011
By PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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And she woke up
And the sun was beaming;
The birds were singing her song
She closed her eyes
And harmonized in a yawn


And she knows

That today

Is going to change her life forever

And she believes

That yesterday

Meant more to her than anything

And anyone can see that

She’s in love

So full of life
She could not hide
The light shining out of her brown eyes
She lit the room with a smile
And graced the air with a gentle pride

I had a dream last night
That I was yours and you were mine
And everything was alright
But dreams like that just fade into the sunshine


And she knows

That today

Is going to change her life forever

And she believes

That yesterday

Meant more to her than anything

And anyone can see that

She’s in love

On the other side
Of the world he slept
The sun on him had just set
On her it rose
And on dreams of her in his head


And he knows

That tonight

Is going to change their lives forever

And he hopes

That the note he sent

Will bring her back the time they spent

He can’t wait to let her know

He’s coming home

© Alejandra D., Milford, CT

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This article has 16 comments.

PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 12 2013 at 3:17 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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Thanks :) Me too.
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 2 2013 at 2:40 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

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&quot;Never fear shadows. They simply mean there&#039;s a light shining somewhere nearby.&quot; - Unknown

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I love this! It really struck a chord in my heart. I have a big spot in my heart for the people in the military, and poems relating to them just make me want to cry, sing and cry some more all at the same time.
PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 30 2011 at 3:15 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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Thanks! Of course I will.
Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2011 at 10:19 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don&#039;t you go to sleep, it&#039;s such a bitter form of refuge, oh don&#039;t you know the kingdom&#039;s under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

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This is so great, I don't even know what to say to tell you how blown away I was. It hits very close to home... I'll leave it at that. Think maybe you could check out my work sometime?
RandomInspiration GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2011 at 12:36 am
RandomInspiration GOLD, Schulenburg, Texas
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Laugh as much as you breathe, and love as long as you live &lt;3

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Wow...that was truly amazing and inspiring.  Your word choice is so perfect, and i don't know if you made up the "eye of the storm" thing but regardless, it makes the whole piece even more beautiful.  Spectacular :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 1:09 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks i would love feedback :P
PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 1:02 am
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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Haha, thanks. I've already looked at over half your work over the past few weeks. I'll give you some feedback if you want. You keep up the good work, too, ok?
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 12:54 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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i would really appreciate it if u could look at my work i love to hear from people great work keep it up
SN3RD BRONZE said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 12:51 pm
SN3RD BRONZE, Glendale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m the bugs bunny, and if you ain&#039;t got my carrots, you ain&#039;t got nothin&#039; for me!&quot; --Nicki Minaj

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Nice poem! I posted a chapter of my book if you could read and rate and comment it, I'd really like that. And some references would be nice
PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 3:17 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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There is an unfortunate performance of it on youtube at my channel, gzunzicker. Hope you like :)
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 2:17 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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This is great! Do you have music that goes with it yet?
thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 9:45 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

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Wow... I sound pretty crazy here don't I? haha. I mean I WAS crazy about your poem but yeesh! I had no idea I had used so many exclamation points.... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:) lol

thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 9:34 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

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wow. I sound like a crazy person don't I? haha I mean, I was crazy about your poem and all, but man, I went overboard with the exclamation points... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:)

thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 9:32 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 351 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

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wow... I sounded like i was going crazy didn't I? lol! I mean i was crazy about the poem but yeesh i didn't know I put so many exclamation points.... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:)

PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 3:17 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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Thanks .....    

:D

thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 2:37 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 351 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

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Oh my gosh!!! This is my absolute favorite. I had goosebumps at the end (and i mean literally!) WOW!!! It's awesome. Just to let you know, I'm favorite-ing it. If that is okay with you! :) LOOOOVE it. ;)