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Hello

July 11, 2011
By nicoledente PLATINUM, Galion, Ohio
nicoledente PLATINUM, Galion, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
If you aren't going to believe my answer, then you shouldn't have asked!


You're watching her cry
and I don't understand
why are you watching her cry?
Watching her suffer
through the brutality of this world?
Can you not notice
the vacant look that appears
in her eyes;
the empty way
she says
Hello.
Hello.
Hello.
Hello, don't you notice?
The brutal way
she says your name.
Hello, don't you see?
The deadly look
you get.
She'll never again
trust
all because of you.
Hello, don't you notice what you've done?
Hello, don't you see
how you've betrayed her?
The vacant look in her eyes,
the empty way
she says
Hello.
Hello.
Hello.
If she looks at you
the vacant look won't leave.
But if
she says
Hello
to you,
she'll mean
Goodbye.
And that
won't change.

The author's comments:
A third person POV of the betrayel of a girl. Very sad, very beautiful.

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