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Wondering when its gonna stop

May 11, 2012
By NaomiStatia GOLD, Oranjestad, Other
NaomiStatia GOLD, Oranjestad, Other
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I'm standing in the rain,
Wondering when it's gonna stop,
Then I realize that this, is my life.

Standing alone in the rain, wait for it to stop.
Wet and cold, with no warm in my body;
My glow is out, due to the rain.
A rain drop falls, spatters on the wall
Just like my dreams as fall to the ground.

I'm standing in the rain,
Wondering when its gonna stop,
Then I realize that this, is my life.

Heavy clouds form, over my drooping head;
As the time slips away, they release the weight.
Just like me,
Weight are the deep secrets, which have filled my soul.
And as the weight falls, it lands on my heart.

I'm standing in the rain,
Wondering when its gonna stop,
Then I realize that this, is my life.

No one's there to hold my hand,
As the droplets fall from my cheeks.
I'm standing there empty handed; looking forward in the dark,
Which leads no where.
Like rain clouds, they have no purpose but to cry,
Their deep long rains.

I'm standing in the rain,
Wondering when its gonna stop.


The author's comments:
I wrote this on the spur of the moment singing. I wrote it down, went over it and edit it. Please rate and possibly comment! Thanks!! :)

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statiamom said...
on May. 13 2012 at 6:00 am
Congratulations!  Keep up the great work, you've got talent.