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Scream?

November 21, 2013
By TheUnspoken1 SILVER, Tecumseh, Nebraska
TheUnspoken1 SILVER, Tecumseh, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s hard to be a dimond in a rhinestone world.&quot; - Blood On The Dance Floor&hearts;<br /> &quot; You can&#039;t judge me by my cover, it&#039;s not what you see but what you discover. &quot; Blood On The Dance Floor&hearts;<br /> &quot; Don&#039;t be afraid to stand out. &quot; Britt Nicole&hearts;


Have you ever felt weak?
Lost the words you were trying to speak.
Maybe you drowned in your darkest hour.
You never knew pain would taste this sour.
Thank you for abandoning me.
I do nothing but sorrow and whep.
I never knew it would hurt this bad.
Drifting away like an empty bag.
You strike with anger like a lightening beam.
All you wanna do is SCREAM!
You wonder if they can hear you.
Maybe the days you had numbered were through.
SCREAM if you have to.
Cry if it's what you must do.
All the pain hidden inside.
Fake smiles to complete the outside.
Maybe it's tim3es to do waht you need to do.
It's time I realize,
My life is over due.


The author's comments:
Emotional state of mind, happens to be how I am feeling.

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on Nov. 26 2013 at 8:43 am
TheUnspoken1 SILVER, Tecumseh, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s hard to be a dimond in a rhinestone world.&quot; - Blood On The Dance Floor&hearts;<br /> &quot; You can&#039;t judge me by my cover, it&#039;s not what you see but what you discover. &quot; Blood On The Dance Floor&hearts;<br /> &quot; Don&#039;t be afraid to stand out. &quot; Britt Nicole&hearts;

Thank you♥ Means a lot.

on Nov. 22 2013 at 2:32 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never fear shadows. They simply mean there&#039;s a light shining somewhere nearby.&quot; - Unknown

My favorite line is the last line. I realllllly really liked that. Also, the like that talks about "an empty bag" reminds me of the beginning of "Firework" by Katy Perry... Kind of the same theme there. But I love this poem. Super deep, great vocab, etc etc. nice job.