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Please forgive me.

March 31, 2015
By Vriska BRONZE, Bridgeport, Pennsylvania
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Vriska BRONZE, Bridgeport, Pennsylvania
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Stay strong

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When you see me I see your smile fade away 

I can clearly tell that you hate me today 

So please... Please forgive me 

I'm sorry... I'm sorry

Ive been tryna making this right 

But it only results in a fight

And I thjnk I might be losing you

tell me what I have to do

Cause I ain't trying to lose you

just tell me what I have to do.

 

i want you to be happy

but I can't stand it when you're mad at me

Just hear me out and you will see

what us fight does to me

© Beth S., Marblehead, MA

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Izzy777 SILVER said...
on May. 2 2015 at 12:54 am
Izzy777 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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&quot;I always wonder why birds stay in one place when they can fly anywhere around the world. But then I ask myself the same question.&quot;

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You got some typos, and that's okay, it isn't permanent. I love that you're realistic, I can relate 100% on this poem. The title is great, and the message is awesome. A lot of emotion. Maybe check out my piece, "A letter to my sister" if you have a chance.