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Conversation I

September 11, 2023
By stormystormyy BRONZE, Burbank, California
stormystormyy BRONZE, Burbank, California
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Favorite Quote:
“What did you write in the letter?"<br /> <br /> Frog said, "I wrote 'Dear Toad, I am glad that you are my best friend.<br /> <br /> Your best friend, Frog.'<br /> <br /> "Oh, said Toad, "that makes a very good letter.”


Your pity makes naught a difference, your ‘woe’.

Sadistic you watch them, keep your rotgut.

Empathetic lack incenses me. But,

an attractive threat, transparently so.

Your thrall is apparent: all I can do-

‘I’m sorry’ you simper, saccharine sweet

Its okay, but please no more hits to greet

Just want this with you, no black nor the blue


Scarlet, azul on a beat-up paintbrush.

Paint me new unbroken lines or maybe

don’t. Don’t paint them. Please don't draw me new veins

A new place you cut through. Cerise would rush,

flush all of my tears and fears and-  Baby,

Would you want that? ‘Stead of in your chains?


The author's comments:

This sonnet is a combination of my emotions regarding my father and regarding my ex. There's a lot of overlap there, and the contrasts were interesting to use in the poem. It's a plea to let go, and a diatribe with the behaviors the speaker has suffered.

This is the first part of a two poem piece, where the speakers are having a conversation. This speaker is the battered or 'unproblematic' partner, while the other is abusive or 'problematic'. 


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