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Feeling

September 28, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."


I’m feeling like I’m wishing
Like a part of me is breaking
like a change is quickly coming
like my hands will not stop shaking

I’m feeling like its hard
And its not worth all this pain
I’m feeling like I need to cry
I wish that it would rain.

I can’t say what I’m feeling
I’m not quite sure what’s wrong
I need to start the healing
Play this sweet sad song


The author's comments:
I wrote this like last year and I just found it. But it's nice, it has a pretty ring to it I think... I don't know.

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on Aug. 23 2014 at 2:09 pm
Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
16 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.” -Marilyn Monroe

love it!!! check out some of my work i'd love to get feedback from an amazing writer like you. I'm still learning and new- Kisses

on Apr. 21 2012 at 6:24 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!<br /> &quot;Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing&quot; Benjamin Franklin

Oh this is really good!! Great job keep up the great work!

EllieHeart said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:25 am
EllieHeart, Tempe, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Pay no attention to what the critics say; no statue has ever been erected to a critic.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Jean Sibelius

I loved this poem! Could really feel the emotion. Can you take a look at my poem Siren Lies and comment? Thanks!

on Dec. 10 2011 at 12:03 am
Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
14 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Loved you once love you still always have always will.~ Theres always a little truth behind every &quot;just kidding&quot; a little knowledge behind every &quot; i don&#039;t know&quot;~ a little emotion behind every &quot; i don&quot;t care&quot;~ And a little pain behind every &quot;I&#039;m Okay&quot;.

i seriously love this peom so much...<3

on Nov. 19 2011 at 5:48 pm
SocialPariah GOLD, Laurel, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
A dream is just a recycled memory.

Poem is great!! I loved it...but you forgot the cuplet at the end of a sonnet <3 loved it n e ways

BeingAnna GOLD said...
on May. 4 2011 at 8:52 pm
BeingAnna GOLD, Montreal, Other
13 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty<br /> -Marilyn Monroe

For some reason this made me want to cry. I can really connect with the emotion in this poem and I think it's soo touching. I feel like I wrote this, like you know exactly how I feel. It's amazing!

on Mar. 17 2011 at 8:21 pm
LoveDeep BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Success is what &quot;YOU&quot; make it.

Great poem, it made me wanna go grab a pen and paper.

on Feb. 6 2011 at 11:24 pm
lambthing BRONZE, Mason City, Iowa
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best way to have honor is to be what you pretend to be.&quot; - Socrates

I love it; this is so simple, so pretty, and yes, it DOES have a lovely ring to it; excellent. (:

on Jan. 18 2011 at 5:32 pm
SierraWilkerson SILVER, Old Hickory, Tennessee
8 articles 3 photos 6 comments
i could feel your emotion in it.  i love it :)

jasso GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 6:10 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
16 articles 10 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

didnt use that much of complex words

and thats exactly why i like it

hey try seeing my stuff

hope u like them too!!!


on Dec. 3 2010 at 4:21 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream as if you&#039;ll live forever<br /> live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow

i know! this is exacly what i've been going through this last week. this is exactly how they I've been feeling

on Dec. 3 2010 at 4:15 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream as if you&#039;ll live forever<br /> live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow

wow, this is very good. it covers the general idea of the emotion. its perfect. i really love it <3

on Sep. 27 2010 at 8:56 pm
taylor.nichole SILVER, Bakersfield, California
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I restore myself when I&#039;m alone -Maralin Monroe<br /> iv&#039;e always been misrepresented. You know, I could dress in a clown costume and laugh with the happy people but they&#039;d still say i&#039;m a dark personality. - Tim Burton

this was realy good. you gots some talent.. relatable

on Jul. 27 2010 at 11:35 pm
Lester_34 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep your head held high becuz ppl wuld kill to c u fall

this is a great one!!

on Jul. 21 2010 at 7:14 pm
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
134 articles 2 photos 85 comments
That does have a nice ring, and I can really relate to it.  Good job.

on Jun. 18 2010 at 2:58 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u


cwayho BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2010 at 9:55 pm
cwayho BRONZE, Jericho, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s not about the years in your life. It&#039;s about the life in your years.&quot;

excellent pulse

the lines and expressions of your feelings, however, were somewhat simple, dull, and lacked poetic weight and effect


on May. 12 2010 at 10:43 am
Priskilla PLATINUM, Ruskin, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;LIVE FAST DIE YOUNG&quot;

This is nice ... And YES it does have a good flow to it

on Mar. 11 2010 at 3:59 pm
Nicole.Jones SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 4 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Move on to the future, don&#039;t look back. Just keep moving, see whats instored for you.&quot; Made it up myself....

this is really nice, it does have a nice flow to it.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 5:49 pm
lemonygirl97 BRONZE, Fort Hunter, New York
3 articles 0 photos 14 comments
It moved my emotions not really no body. It's not physical it's emotional. That is the best way I can explain it.