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September 28, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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I’m feeling like I’m wishing
Like a part of me is breaking
like a change is quickly coming
like my hands will not stop shaking

I’m feeling like its hard
And its not worth all this pain
I’m feeling like I need to cry
I wish that it would rain.

I can’t say what I’m feeling
I’m not quite sure what’s wrong
I need to start the healing
Play this sweet sad song

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

The author's comments:
I wrote this like last year and I just found it. But it's nice, it has a pretty ring to it I think... I don't know.
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Xena_Zionne GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2014 at 2:09 pm
Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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“I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.” -Marilyn Monroe

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love it!!! check out some of my work i'd love to get feedback from an amazing writer like you. I'm still learning and new- Kisses
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2012 at 6:24 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Oh this is really good!! Great job keep up the great work!
EllieHeart said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:25 am
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I loved this poem! Could really feel the emotion. Can you take a look at my poem Siren Lies and comment? Thanks!
Avalon,Liv GOLD said...
on Dec. 10 2011 at 12:03 am
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i seriously love this peom so much...<3
SocialPariah GOLD said...
on Nov. 19 2011 at 5:48 pm
SocialPariah GOLD, Laurel, Maryland
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Poem is great!! I loved it...but you forgot the cuplet at the end of a sonnet <3 loved it n e ways
BeingAnna GOLD said...
on May. 4 2011 at 8:52 pm
BeingAnna GOLD, Montreal, Other
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For some reason this made me want to cry. I can really connect with the emotion in this poem and I think it's soo touching. I feel like I wrote this, like you know exactly how I feel. It's amazing!
LoveDeep BRONZE said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 8:21 pm
LoveDeep BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Great poem, it made me wanna go grab a pen and paper.
lambthing BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2011 at 11:24 pm
lambthing BRONZE, Mason City, Iowa
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I love it; this is so simple, so pretty, and yes, it DOES have a lovely ring to it; excellent. (:
SierraWilkerson SILVER said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 5:32 pm
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i could feel your emotion in it.  i love it :)
jasso GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 6:10 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
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didnt use that much of complex words

and thats exactly why i like it

hey try seeing my stuff

hope u like them too!!!

OriginalCarbonation GOLD said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 4:21 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
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i know! this is exacly what i've been going through this last week. this is exactly how they I've been feeling
OriginalCarbonation GOLD said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 4:15 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
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dream as if you&#039;ll live forever<br /> live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow

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wow, this is very good. it covers the general idea of the emotion. its perfect. i really love it <3
taylor.nichole SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2010 at 8:56 pm
taylor.nichole SILVER, Bakersfield, California
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this was realy good. you gots some talent.. relatable
Lester_34 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 11:35 pm
Lester_34 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
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this is a great one!!
nickykens ELITE said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 7:14 pm
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
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That does have a nice ring, and I can really relate to it.  Good job.
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 2:58 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u

cwayho BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2010 at 9:55 pm
cwayho BRONZE, Jericho, New York
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excellent pulse

the lines and expressions of your feelings, however, were somewhat simple, dull, and lacked poetic weight and effect

Priskilla PLATINUM said...
on May. 12 2010 at 10:43 am
Priskilla PLATINUM, Ruskin, Florida
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This is nice ... And YES it does have a good flow to it
Nicole.Jones SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 3:59 pm
Nicole.Jones SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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this is really nice, it does have a nice flow to it.
lemonygirl97 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 5:49 pm
lemonygirl97 BRONZE, Fort Hunter, New York
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It moved my emotions not really no body. It's not physical it's emotional. That is the best way I can explain it.