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The Mask

October 11, 2009
By jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

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They think they know who I am,
and exactly what I'll be.
They see the side I only expose,
instead of seeing the "real me".

But everything I hide away,
is hidden behind a mask.
Every feeling, thought, and smile
has been buried with my past.

So I put on my fake face,
and steady my broken voice.
I transform myself into a monster
and I do it without a choice.

My smile has no feeling
and my eyes are only hollow.
My sunshine has been chased away,
and the darkness is all I follow.

But one of these days I'll break free,
and they won't now me anymore!
They'll finally see the honest smile
that they haven't seen before.

And then I will leave them all behind
as I find myself that day.
I will be myself again,
when the mask finally goes away.

The author's comments:
Finding out who you really are is a big part of growing up. This poem was written to describe how you can be a totally different person than the one you really show.
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This article has 63 comments.

alohagirl7 GOLD said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 3:20 pm
alohagirl7 GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
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duude. i absolutely love this. it is pretty deep and has a great flow, it sounds like something i would write, because i know the feeling
renni SILVER said...
on Jun. 23 2011 at 1:08 pm
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
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beautiful, i love it.
AndySixxLover GOLD said...
on May. 10 2011 at 7:30 pm
AndySixxLover GOLD, Weatherford, Texas
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amazing i love it!!!
to.hold.the.sun SILVER said...
on Mar. 27 2011 at 6:32 pm
to.hold.the.sun SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
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Beautiful and uplifting.
dolphin13 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2011 at 3:25 pm
dolphin13 BRONZE, North St. Paul, Minnesota
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Very Nice! It was all very good except now should be know. Keep writing!
TheHangingGirl BRONZE said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 5:59 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Thats one of those poems you go by thinking, " Nahh, it won't be as good. Sounds like the type of poem everybody else makes. " Then when you do read it you find out " This is one of a kind. ABsolutely amazing." This , i wish, i could've thought of. :)
i am rock said...
on Feb. 11 2011 at 8:36 am

that was a nice 1

 

sunnyhunny PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 8:03 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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Wow, nice job!  I've felt this way before too.
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 11:14 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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incrediblee. enoughh saidd:D
sillywillysooz GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 9:11 pm
sillywillysooz GOLD, Grantsville, Utah
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this is so AMAZING!!
FunFace GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 10:17 am
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 is really amazing, i know everyone is saying this but i want you to know how much support you have.  this si how i often feel and i think everyone out there feels like thehave  mask on somtimes.
jasso GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 9:54 am
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i like it

i love the title the most !!!

plz try commenting on my stuff too!!

GreenLover SILVER said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 10:36 am
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
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wow that was really nice i loved it.... i can relate to it.. i wrote a poem lik dis well its the same concept .. anywayz i loved it ..great job :)

hope you can check out some of my work

pnkninja11 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 8 2010 at 7:49 am
pnkninja11 BRONZE, Partlow, Virginia
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I feel like I can connect with this poem. When I read this poem it brought me back to when I was in middle school and beginning of high school. But then it later changed. I no longer wear the mask anymore.
Bookwormwriter SILVER said...
on Sep. 3 2010 at 8:53 pm
Bookwormwriter SILVER, Centerville, Ohio
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oh my gosh that was one of the best!  excelent positive self....  okay, never mind.  i forgot the word.  anyway, i loved it!  great feelign behind the words.
avantgarde GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 6:22 pm
avantgarde GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
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This is beautiful poem! The imagery is stunning!

 

However, this is not a real sonnet. Sonnets have 10 syllables per line and follow an ababcdcdefefgg pattern.

 

Excluding that, well done!

kiwi12 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 8:59 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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ok, so i've commented on this already, but i'm doing it again. I love this poem! you area fantastic writer!
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 7:59 pm
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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So i commented on "Forever Regrets" and this poem i feel also relates to that ex-best friend i had. I have been holding back from letting my feelings out about her on paper, but now i see that i dont need to write about how i feel about her, when i read your writing, and its like you are showing the world for me. haha, this is really great.
waywithwords GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:31 pm
waywithwords GOLD, Forest Hill, Maryland
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this is a complete and utter masterpiece! definitely in my top 3 favorite poems on this website!
peacemaker14 SILVER said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 12:16 am
peacemaker14 SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
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wow that was a good poem I absolutley love it tis good beacause everyone including myself has a mask that is really hard to take off