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Silent Whispers

December 3, 2009
By FluffeeKittee SILVER, Birmingham, Alabama
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FluffeeKittee SILVER, Birmingham, Alabama
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"Sometimes I wish you would pay closer attention to my favorite songs, because the words they sing are the words I'm too afraid to say" -- anonymous.

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Roses are red, my love, violets are blue.
True love hurts, dear, but you are worth the pain.
Like many guys but none compare to you.
A single look from you makes me insane.
Rivers run fast, just like my pulse near you.
Ocean hugs Coast, so Sweetheart pull me close to you.
If perhaps Ocean bid the Beach adieu,
A sorrowful song I sure would compose.
Your smile says "I love you" silently;
Listen to my eyes whisper the same thing.
Hear your name and my heart beats violently,
Golden silence fills the air while my heart sings.

Be my Valentine, it's you I adore,
The Waves and Shore combined forevermore...

© Piper C., Roswell, GA

The author's comments:
Sometimes telling someone you love them is too obvious and it cheapens it; sometimes the only true way to tell someone you're in love with them is found in the simple things.
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Starrlyt PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 11:43 am
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
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Ooooh!!!  I really liked this...like Milo said, everyone can relate to it. Even socially challenged people like me...lol.
Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 8:12 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.